domingo, 29 de octubre de 2017

My opinion paragraph.



I would like to start this opinion paragraph by saying that Mark Zuckerberg's idea must be beneficial for refugees because it can be a great way to talk with their families and friends and to ask for help, which is the most important for these refugees. Moreover, if the refugees had Internet, they could amuse themselves and they wouldn't be bored. In summary,  I consider that the idea of bringing them Internet access must help them to deal better with their situation.

To my mind, providing that this medium to refugees to flee from war and poverty must have a drawback, apart from the advantages. I think that instead of using mediums to bring them Internet access, the volunteers should try to give refugees ways to find a job and consequently live like most people, with an individual home.
To sum up, I consider that this help has its right part and its bad part, but is is a great and original idea.

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